1. Select eight of the following writing prompts and write topic sentences. Your sentences should be clear so your reader knows what will follow.
School Shopping Music
Unforgettable dream Homeroom Haiti
Brett Favre High School Sports Pets
Vacation Exhaustion Cars
Summer Dress Code Scams
Winter Technology Africa
2. From the eight topic sentences, choose 1 of the topic sentences to write a full paragraph with at least three supporting details.
Be sure to include a clincher sentence!
3. Edit your paragraph. Check that your topic sentence introduces your paragraph, your supporting sentences relate to your topic sentence, adn finally, that your clincher sentence ties everything together.
4. Print a final copy and turn it in.
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High school sports helps with boosting your grades.
ReplyDeleteIf your out for a sport you have to get good grades to play.
You can't drink or u well brake the code of your sport.
Sports help stimulate your mind to think.
So if High school sports boost your grades why not out out for one.
Kevin Karas-
ReplyDeleteThere are many types of school.
Unforgettable dream are something everyone has.
Brett Favre holds many NFL records.
Summer is many people’s favorite season.
Winter is the coldest season of the year
Exhaustion can kill.
Without Technology many people would be without a job.
Music makes you lose control.
There are many types of school. There are non-government schools, private schools, military school, home school, and boarding schools. Non-government schools are school without any control by the government. Private schools are mostly religious schools. Military schools are school ran by the military. Home schooling is all ran out of a house, most of the time your own. Boarding schools are schools where students live in dorms, sometimes they are gender separated. So now that you know more about the types of school, maybe you can choice which would be right for you future kid/kids.
Mr. Feick to Kevin
ReplyDeleteI would change your topic sentence a little bit so that it connects with your clincher sentence.
Topic Sentence Revised: "When deciding on your child's education, you need to consider the many types of school."
Mr. Feick
School starts way to early.
ReplyDeleteBrett Favre should just retire already.
Vacation should be taken by everyone.
Summer is my favorite season.
The Dress Code is to strict.
Music is feelings for the soul.
Pets are hard work to take care of.
Cars are born to go fast.
1.) Life as a teenager revolves around school.
ReplyDelete2.) Brett Favre, the QB for the Minnesota Vikings, is a good player but he's self centeredd.
3.) Oh. I want that, oh! I want that more, shoppings a girls favorite sport.
4.)A man's most trustworthy, obedient friend is a dog.
5.) Things are constantly moving forward in the U.S. like new improvements in tecnology.
6.) Music in general is a way to express your feelings.
7.)We can't even start to imagine the horror of the now homeless, abandonedment of the haiti people.
8.) So many new responsibilites come with the winter season.
Things are constantly moving forward in the U.S. like new improvements in tecnology. Our sociaty is in constant motion. With the ipod, it use to be just records, then Cd's, then we advanced to the mp3 player, and now to the ipod touch. We have also advanced in the phone area, in the past they had the phones that hung on the wall. Then we made the huge phones that we could carry with us. That was everything. Now a days, it's whoses got the smallest, thinest, more efficent phone. In cars we've also advanced in, we had horse pulled buggies, now we've got Tiburons, Genesis Coupe, and Hyundai's new Neos. The U.S. sociaty is wrapped in the new improvements with the ipod, cell phones and automabiles.
Mitch - Your topic sentence works if your supporting sentences prove it. Provide supporting details to have your topic sentence function the way that it should. Your clincher ties up your paragraph, but again, the supporting details need adjusting.
ReplyDeleteKaitlyn - Very Well Done!
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